Thursday, 22 September 2011

Direction Unit: Initial Script

INT.TRUDY'S KITCHEN

               TRUDY a TIRED SCRUFFY looking mother and KATIE a SMARTLY
               dressed doctor walk through to join SIOBHAN a WELL DRESSED,
               WELL GROOMED LAWYER who is sitting at the LARGE dinning table
               drinking wine. JESSICA a TRENDY CASUALLY dressed events
               planner walks over from pouring drinks, greets Katie and sits
               down.

                                   JESSICA
                         You see married men are a no
                         brainer their bedroom changed,
                         their low maintenance and you've
                         got a ready made excite strategy.
                         No mess, no fuss. Hi

                                   KATIE
                         Hi

                                   SIOBHAN
                         Except sometimes the wives catch
                         you.

                                   TRUDY
                         Well isn't that the whole point?

                                   JESSICA
                         No the point was to shag him in the
                         top 3 Parisian bridal suites at our
                         client's expence.

                                   SIOBHAN
                         God I want your life Jess

                                   TRUDY
                         How can you say that. Harry's the
                         loveliest man in the world.

                                   SIOBHAN
                         Alright I'd only want her sex life.
                         And your kids.

                                   TRUDY
                         Ahh. Well at least your in love.

                                   KATIE
                         Put together you'd make one
                         perfectly satisfied individual.

                                   JESSICA
                         No I'm satisfied with sex.

                                   TRUDY
                         Jess you don't die if you don't get
                         your leg over.

                                   JESSICA
                         Clearly I would have buried you
                         years ago.

                                   KATIE
                         No fighting

                                   SIOBHAN
                         Ok. Katie multiple choice sex, love
                         or kids?

                                   KATIE
                         What can I only have one? Ummm.
                         Love

                                   TRUDY
                         I think someone asked me out today

                                   KATIE
                         Really

                                   JESSICA
                         Oh yeah

                                   SIOBHAN
                         Hello

                                   TRUDY
                         He's a new dad at school and I
                         think he's just got divorced and we
                         got chatting at the supermarket and
                         he said that we should go for a
                         coffee and I went "errrmmm errrmm"

                                   JESSICA
                         Hang on a minute he asked you out
                         for a coffee in Sainsbury's?

                                   TRUDY
                         No. In Tesco actually and well I'm
                         not really sure he was asking me
                         out.

                                   SIOBHAN
                         What did he say? Exact words

                                   TRUDY
                         Do you fancy going for a coffee?

                                   SIOBHAN
                         He said fancy?

                                   TRUDY
                         I think so

                                   SIOBHAN
                         If he said that he was asking you
                         out

                                   TRUDY
                         Oh no maybe he said won't

                                   SIOBHAN
                         Well that's different. That's more
                         tricky to interpret.

                                   JESSICA

               Stands up and takes an empty bottle of wine and puts it on
               the side.
                         You see this is exactly why I
                         switched from English to modern
                         languages

                                   TRUDY
                         Sorry do we want to talk about your
                         sex life some more?

                                   SIOBHAN
                         Come on women think. We've been
                         waiting 6 years for this. Want? Or
                         fancy?

               Jessica picks up a letter, with a cheque for £2,000,000
               attached to it,from the side and reads it. Then looks at
               Trudy.

                                   TRUDY
                         Fancy

                                   SIOBHAN
                         He was asking you out

                                   TRUDY
                         Really

                                   JESSICA

               Walks back to the table and shows Trudy the letter she has
               found.
                         Trud. When did this come?

               Siobhan takes the letter and reads it

                                   TRUDY
                         It came this morning

                                   SIOBHAN
                         So you've scored a million and
                         pulled on the same day

               Siobhan passes the letter to Katie. She studies it for a
               while.



               INT. TRUDY'S HALL WAY

               Trudy sees Jessica and Siobhan out of the door.

                                   JESSICA
                         See ya Trude



               INT. TRUDY'S KITCHEN

               Katie is standing up still looking at the cheque. Trudy is
               clearing the table.

                                   KATIE
                         Why haven't you paid it in yet?

                                   TRUDY
                         Guilt. I know everything is
                         screaming at me to move on the
                         girls are both at school finally
                         settled for money and someone's
                         even asked me out after 6 years. I
                         mean someone I quite like. I mean
                         how can I move one? I still don't
                         know what happened to Paul. I mean
                         what if he is still out there.

                                   KATIE
                         No he's not out there

                                   TRUDY
                         There's phone calls

                                   KATIE
                         Police traced them

                                   TRUDY
                         But they were from public places

                                   KATIE
                         Thousands of people died in the
                         towers Trudy where else would he be

                                   TRUDY
                         Well maybe he lost his memory

                                   KATIE
                         Then he wouldn't be calling you
                         from pizza restaurants and cab
                         firms would he?

                                   TRUDY
                         You don't understand what it's like
                         not being able to say goodbye to
                         him properly ...

                                   KATIE
                         ... It's been 6 years Trudy let it
                         go for christ sake. I'm sorry

                                   TRUDY
                         Katie. Is everything alright?

                                   KATIE
                         I've been having an affair

                                   TRUDY
                         What?

                                   KATIE
                         For 2 years he was married. He was
                         going to leave his wife but he got
                         ill and he died last week. John's
                         funeral was this morning.

                                   TRUDY
                         Oh my god. Why didn't you tell me?

                                   KATIE
                         I couldn't. I wanted to loads of
                         times and oh god I know it sounds
                         completely mad but I just couldn't

                                   TRUDY
                         Why not?

                                   KATIE
                         Because he was my patient and
                         because you would have told me to
                         stop

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